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I liked the melody, but I feel the 16-bit aspect could have been toned down. It reminded me of bagpipe with the constant drone of a single note in the background.
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I liked the melody, but I feel the 16-bit aspect could have been toned down. It reminded me of bagpipe with the constant drone of a single note in the background.
Bagpipes rock!...Don't they? :D
It's good, but...
In the beginning I think that the transition from hardcore bass beat to piano melody was too abrupt. This happened later on as well, it's just not as stark as in the beginning. I like that your entry doesn't suffer from "Blink 182 syndrome" and I like the vocals, but something is wrong with the echo because at some points it completely clashes with the beat.
Thank you for your comments.
I the beginning I wanted the transition to be abrupt but I could see what you mean that this may not be favorable; Mostly I was experimenting with less transitioning to see if I could keep the song interesting all throughout (by not having as much repetition.)
And I agree the vocals sometimes clash with the beat and I will take that into consideration for further entries.
Good
It's good for what you want to use it for- I can definitely see it in a my-father-is-dying scene in a movie.
I think it could be improved however; maybe if you were to add a dramatic build and then a resolution to the climax at the end. Think of a part in the move where the dying person is about to tell someone something VERY important, but then dies before saying it...
It loops well though- props for that! lol
I could make an extended version, I just put this together in 30 minutes trying to make an opening for my movie, but the chords were too depressing, so I just made it as this.
Nice!
All my five are belong to this, as well my ten!! Good Job!
Thanks!
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